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Re: No name, just a peice I wrote out of boredom.
Hello! :elephant: That was a good short story, the plot was well developed and I really enjoyed reading it. There were a few over detailed sentences where I felt you ...
Jan 18, 2010 -
Re: The Prince's Mistake
Hey, I'm Gen. I loved it! :D That was a really, really good piece. I loved the plot, it was very original and creative. I didn't like it straight away, ...
Jan 17, 2010 -
Re: Done faking whats not there
That was very nice. I would do a proper review, but I have no idea how to review poetry :D. I shall have a crack at it though, here goes; ...
Nov 21, 2009 -
Re: Greensleeves
Loved it, very nice. :smt003 All in all, it was a beautiful piece of writing that I absolutely adored, but I did spot tense mix-up and the occasional spelling mistake ...
Nov 20, 2009 -
Re: The Fear
This was awesome, it needs a little more expanding, and could be a nice short story, that is if you wanted to make it a few hundred words longer. :D ...
Nov 14, 2009 -
Re: Hills of Roses - 1
Okay, so I realize that the next part was just the next day, but I also had a hard time figuring that out, if you hadn't have told me in ...
Nov 9, 2009 -
Re: What REALLY Happens In Middle School Ch.1
Hey I'm Gen. I love romantic fiction, so this should be fun. I'm all for nit-picky reviews, so I'm going to treat you to one of mine; here we go. ...
Nov 9, 2009 -
Re: Love Sucks (Chapter 2)
Hey Mo. I shall have fun dissecting your story. :P The sky is the colour worn jeans Apart from the fact that color is spelled wrong (but only because this ...
Sep 30, 2009 -
Re: Nothing.
Hey, I'm Gen, and it will be my pleasure reviewing your story today. OK, so this is a good story. I like it, but I think describing the 'transformers' as ...
Sep 30, 2009 -
Re: The Hospital Story
Hey I'm Gen, and it will be my pleasure to review your work. :smt003 Only a few things But unfortunately, I am more beat up than you are, according to ...
Sep 29, 2009 -
Re: Cruel Hoax
Hey, I'm Gen, and I will be very happily reviewing your work for the next few minutes. Now for some nit-picking... Tanya opened her eyes to black. I don't really ...
Sep 29, 2009 -
Re: Adventures with Captain Kirk (Chapter 2)
I really liked your story, though there are definitely some places where it you wording could be rearranged. I would nit-pick through it, but I don't really see the point, ...
Sep 29, 2009 -
Re: Adventures with Captain Kirk (Chapter 1)
Hey, loved the story. There was one thing that was bugging me, but other than that awesome. :smt003 The winds were enormous and everyone had to board up their windows. ...
Sep 29, 2009 -
Re: Lier Is A Simple Explanation
I really like this story, good job. :smt003 xD I only really have one thing to say about this; the beginning of your story made no sense. She asks him ...
Sep 29, 2009 -
Re: Moonlight Decision (Enjoy!)
Hey I'm Gen, and I am going to have fun reviewing your really awesome work :smt003 I thought that was really awesome! Me, I'm a little more into poetry with ...
Sep 27, 2009
